申请UC Berkeley的PS范文

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申请加州大学伯克利分校本科的PS---UC Berkeley PS: Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. The most fortunate event so far in m

申请加州大学伯克利分校本科的PS---UC Berkeley PS:

Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

The most fortunate event so far in my life, is that I was accepted by Suzhou High School, where I was offered numerous opportunities beyond class to shape myself into a mature adult, and where I got some idea of what I am going to do in my future.

No sooner had I passed the three-month mark at Suzhou High, than I encountered my first challenge - attending the school debate contest as the first debater representing my class. I spent weeks discussing the topics with my teammates until midnight. Our parents would go to bed but we were still up, in front of the computer screens honing out debate points. Even if we didn't win the championship, I was pleased to find that my brain was much more diligent since it kept running and producing personal thoughts whenever I got some information, and I could always got the biggest applause for my Chinese class speech.

Then came the second challenge - I was selected to act in the big annual play by our Drama Society. I worked hard to interpret my role, rushing to the society after school, rehearsing until well after dark. On stage, I was surprised and exhilarated to observe that my actions and words could have such a strong influence upon people I could make the whole audience laugh heartily with a tiny movement, and silence the happy hall with a sudden change of my tone. I realized with excitement my power over others for the first time.www.liuxue.la

In the 11th grade, I established the Society Organization Office with several other students, in which I acted as a sort of Minister of Publicity, assigning tasks for all 40 school societies and managing them. In addition, I was promoted to the President of our school Drama Society. With the two new positions, I was responsible for leading other people, and I achieved a strong sense of fulfillment as a leader - every time I spoke to all the presidents of our school societies, and everytime I organized an acclaimed show, I felt quite proud of myself.

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